Ikoku Nikki (Journal With Witch) – 13 (End) and Series Review

I would never in a million years apply the “glass half-empty/half-full” metaphor to a show as comprehensively stellar as Ikoku Nikki. I have no idea what’s going to be my #1 series of 2026 – there are a lot of good manga being adapted. But I know this series will be in the running. That glass is, like, 98% full. Still, I don’t have it in me to not be a little wistful about how it could have been even better. The adaptation was never going to comfortably fit 11 volumes in 13 episodes, that’s a given. It seems to have pretty much just stopped about 2/3 of the way through. It also cut out almost everything relating to Asa’s quest to understand who her father was.

That sucks, I tell you. Knowing that 2% is out there and not being able to pretend it isn’t. The “think and think” part, that I got down. It’s the “then you stop” I struggle with. Nevertheless, that 98% – wow. We had as far as I know a first-time director here (Ooshiro Miyuki). But Shuka assembled a murderer’s row of episode directors – Oomori Takahiro, Deai Kotomi, Kawatsura Shinya among others – which I think was key to the series’ success. As for casting, Sawashiro Miyuki is obviously a known quantity – she’s consistently great. But Mori Fuuko is practically a newcomer seiyuu, and she was an absolute revelation as Asa.

I don’t really have any major issues with how the adaptation chose to finish – in context. If they were going to just stop, they managed to do so in a way that felt pretty definitive for the story. It was low-key mostly, but that fits the overall tone of the show. And there were a few emotionally powerful moments sprinkled in, too. Ikoku Nikki is about as naturalistic as it gets when it’s not in the desert in Asa’s mind – mostly it’s a story about people talking to each other. The musical number is pretty dramatic by contrast but it provided the platform that the anime ending was built on.

As expected, Asa and Chiyo inch closer together. That doesn’t necessarily come at the expense of her friendship with Emiri – in fact we’ll get proof  (perhaps anime-original?) that survives. To be honest the whole Chiyo thing feels a bit disjointed from the rest of the plot – tacked-on. But it is crucial. Asa makes the first approach, when she sees Chiyo at the station. Each asks the other if they’re okay (which Asa finds hilarious). Chiyo rather bluntly asks if Asa felt like her life was over when the accident happened. After only a moment’s hesitation Asa emotionally rejects the idea. “Because I’m alive!”

There are bits and pieces of this Chiyo plot which glaringly seem to be scaled back from how they were originally written. Like Togo-kun, the boy who expresses his concern to her when she finally comes back to school – we’ve met him but I don’t remember if we’ve ever heard his name. The core of it is that Asa decides Chiyo is going to be her goal for the performance – to reach Chiyo and bring her out of her funk. Asa is as ever full of questions for Makio-chan about how to deal with her nerves leading up to the day. Makio is as ever cryptic in her replies. Asa notes that  Makio only uses the graduate-level terminology with her – with her friends she’s far more casual.

I could listen to this banter all day, especially with Asa’s face providing a sort of second dialogue track as they play out. I’m not sure Makio even realizes how confusing her contradictory statements are for a kid Asa’s age. She’s openly talking about herself here – senses dulled to the point where the pain of rejection (or anything else) no longer reaches you. But she then tells Asa that she doesn’t want that for her. What’s really happening here, I think, is Makio is coming to terms with the fact that what works for her won’t work for Asa, and vice-versa. And that makes it a lot harder for her to teach Asa how to be an adult.

Chiyo does, in the end, watch Asa’s performance with the club president, albeit from a classroom window. And her “I witness you” (in English) bowls Asa over with its coolness. Emiri records everything and sends it to Makio. For Asa this is a watershed moment, as it would be for anyone. She faced her fear, did her best, and reached her target – not just Chiyo, but the kids who signed up for the club based on what she did. This is what being who she wants to be means to her – being able to stand out when the mood strikes her.

As a love story, this is an odd one. We’ve never heard Asa or Makio express their love to each other, and it’s frankly hard to imagine Makio ever doing so. And the fact is, she may not even feel that emotion. When she talks to Asa about how even taking her in was not a selfless act but one born of personal principle, I don’t think she’s blowing smoke. To love Ikoku Nikki I think you have to love both Asa and Makio as they are. You can’t expect people to conform to your expectations – they are who they are. Makio not wanting Asa to become like here isn’t because she considers herself broken, or even because Asa is a child. It’s because she knows that would never work for Asa – she’s just too different.

There are no over the top emotional moments here – and indeed very few in the entire series. Histrionics just aren’t its style. But I think that poem Makio wrote for “Ashita” is a big deal. Maybe it’s just me projecting my fantasies onto her, but I think this is Makio’s way of saying “I love you” to Asa. Broadly speaking dogs are extroverts and cats are introverts, and Asa is certainly a dog in that metaphor. A dog is a pack animal – some part of them is missing if they’re not a part of one.

“Packs come with the potential for both safety and danger. Perhaps, like me, you don’t acclimate well with any pack.  Or perhaps you feel it’s noble to spend your life searching for a pack that suits you. You may feel lonely no matter what pack you belong to. Or you may feel most at peace with no company at all.” I think it’s very telling that Makio never told Asa she wrote this – indeed, was vexed when she found out Asa read it. I mean, even if it’s not a declaration of love it’s clearly a benediction – a guide to navigate what’s to come. Makio communicates this in a way that suits her – with a keyboard, in silence, effectively talking to herself. But it was something inside her that needed to be expressed – something she never expected to be part of her.

This was the profoundest moment of the finale for me. The flash-forward ten years into the future was fine for what it was, but I don’t think it was needed – it would have felt a truer end if the fade to black had happened after the birthday cake and Asa “just snapping a beauty’s profile“. But in the final analysis we’re just debating facets of a diamond here – Ikoku Nikki has a depth and truthiness that’s every bit as rare and precious.

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11 comments

  1. H

    Anime of the season for sure and I don’t know what’s going to top it this year. It’s unfortunate we didn’t get to see everything it had to offer but I’m so glad this got made.

  2. c

    This one really feels like a case where the best possible scenario is to both read and watch. I truly think the anime elevated everything it adapted and seeing where it stopped, I understand why they cut out what they did. Immediately after the song, she really spends a lot of time thinking about herself and her dad. Without the time to go there fully, cutting makes some sense. While I have not finished it yet, the manga really does continue to be amazing.

  3. Yeah, I don’t finish the manga on ended series all that often but with this one I will. Not like there’s any chance of the remaining part being adapted, and not like it’s a huge amount of material to read.

  4. K

    Yeah….I don’t see anything else barring possibly/maybe Mushoku Tensei that is going to bowl me over as this anime did for this year. It’s its own thing as well so not easy to compare it to anything else. From a feel good, introspective, slice of life, coming of age, adulting perspective it is hands down my anime of the year. I agree with you Enzo that the fade to black at the birthday cake bit would have work and that poem was the icing on this anime cake. Going to miss it but I am tempted to do something I rarely do…..read the manga to see what i missed and to just keep it going a little longer. More shows like this please anime gods!!

  5. N

    I really, really loved this show, but I will say that the last third was not as great as the first two. A lot of it has to do introducing several characters so late in the game, and while I can understand time constraints, I do feel that a better choice would have been to make a few more daring changes to the source material (which I haven’t read, to be clear, though I intend to). Namely, introduce Chiyo earlier on and cut off Judo guy and Baseball guy. The latter, in particular, I don’t feel was connected to anything in any shape or form, and that’s precious screen time that could have gone to give Chiyo a more robust relationship with Asa.

    Anyways. A friend asked me if I would see the story through Asa had I watched this when I was 15, rather then watching it in my mid 40s and empathizing with Makio. It’s an interesting question, though I think that objectively Makio was he protagonist in the first half of the show and then Asa took over, which might be a good metaphor to her journey.

    I actually want to touch on Makio’s journey and say that I disagree that she truly only took Asa in on principle, and that she didn’t care for her, at that moment, anymore than she would for any other 15-year-old girl in the save predicament. I think that what Makio learns about herself in the course of the story is that she isn’t entirely apathic to her sister’s death, as she’s so quick to declare. The fact is that her sister trampled all over her feelings, so Makio defended herself by erecting a wall. But a wall is not the lack of emotion, it’s merely a containment mechanism. That’s why she kept had flashbacks of sis putting her down, that’s why she eventually had less and less of them, and that’s why she finally tried to convey to Asa that numbing yourself to the pain by cutting off isn’t the best way of going about tending to your pain.

    Onward to the manga we go.

  6. That is an interesting question. I can honestly say that – at least as far as I believe – I would have identified with Makio even at 15. I feel like the I/E spectrum is just intrinsic to who we are as people, and the truth is that doesn’t change as we grow up (or old) – we just deal with it differently. I’m so much like Makio and not much like Asa and age has nothing to do with it. I could never have constantly peppered the adults in my life with questions the way she does, for example.

    What Makio feels is, definitionally, much harder to quantify than what Asa feels. As I said, I think she wrote that Ashita piece as a way to tell Asa she loved her, even if she wouldn’t put it that way herself. In practical terms I think it’s obvious she wouldn’t have taken in some random teen on principle, but that doesn’t mean principle wasn’t behind the decision. She barely knew Asa – I think it’s obvious she didn’t love her at that point. But she felt a connection to her because of her sister and her resentment towards her family, and saw this as a way to strike back at them and to give Asa a chance to escape that cycle she so disliked. Call that what you will – is it selfless? In the end it doesn’t matter that much.

  7. Well, I saw all of Ikoku Nikki on one sitting and despite losing momentum in its latter half, the show is definitely great. Fantastic work by the voice cast and the animation crew. The first half is nothing short of riveting: I cried, I was enthralled, even shocked of how excellent everything was. Sadly, I do agree with other commenters that the second half and especially the last third Ikoku Nikki loses some of its earlier focus. It doesn’t bring down the show and some of the storylines like Chiyo were interesting but felt like they overlapped with the main aspects of the story. Still, highly recommended.

  8. R

    I didn’t get a chance to watch this when it aired but just finished amd wow, it was so good! I love stories like this that are very grounded in the realities of daily life. And the characters of Makio and Asa, getting to know them and see them interact, i became so invested in both their stories. Their seiyuus were fantastic. Thank you for once again leading me to a series I probably wouldn’t have found otherwise!

  9. Yeah, it’s a banger. I’m slowly going through the rest of the manga now.

  10. c

    Yay! Not sure if you will write something formally, but I would be really curious about your thoughts. There is basically one big thing that I wish they had incorporated. Otherwise, I remain impressed with just how well this was adapted given they had 13 episodes to do it.

  11. We’ll see… 😉

    For me the one glaring omission is the anime excising almost everything connected to Asa’s dad, which is a very important part of the manga. Still a great adaptation but that’s a major misstep in my book.

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