Make Heroine ga Oosugiru! – 06

We need to talk about good boys for a minute.

So, for the first time with Make Heroine ga Oosugiru, I was picking up a bit of a True Tears vibe this week. I imagine most will dismiss that out of hand based on the admittedly stark tonal difference between the two series. But they share a certain perceptiveness when it comes to the emotional fragility of teenagers, even if it manifests a little differently. They share a gorgeous depiction of  a small Japanese city close to nature (in this case Toyohashi, in Aichi). And perhaps most critically, they share a very distinct character type at the heart of the story.

Yes, there’s no doubt that Nukumizu – like Shin’ichirou – is a “good boy”. There are many ways this manifests and can be defined, and Nuk-kun is a more typical modern teen than Shin in most respects. But the essence of it is what I said back then: “Shin can’t help himself – he’s serially nice.” Kazuhiko too is serially nice. He stops himself thinking about what he wants, and winds up largely defining himself by the roles he plays in other people’s dramas. Kazuhiko equates it with LN lingo as being a “side character”, but that’s what it boils down to. Both boys are too afraid to be the protagonists in their own story (they’re both writers, actually), and they’s so sweet by nature that they can’t help act when they’re confronted by suffering. Nuk-kun can’t help himself – he’s serially nice. Stop him before he helps again.

As I said, I find this show to be very perceptive when to comes to adolescent emotions. And with hindsight, I feel like the problems plaguing our heroes are relatively simple to diagnose. In essence, theses yoots are too inexperienced to realize this shit they’re trying to pull off just doesn’t work. I mean, one relationship at a time is too hard for most people (never mind teen people). They’re trying to be friends with crushes, have social threesomes with their crush and their partner… The difficulty level here is off the charts. Almost no one could fly this close to the sun and not melt their waxen wings. But they’re young – they don’t get that. They see what could be and think, “why not?”

So really, I feel a lot of pain for them. And that means buy-in with the story, so that’s all good. The focus of most of the agony this time is Remon, whose three-way with Mitsuki and Chihaya may be even more messed up than Anna’s threesome. In the final analysis Mitsuki had gone to Remon for relationship advice (for some reason). Of course now Kazuhiko has to justify his being in a changing stall with Chihaya, and rather than admit he was helping her stalk Mitsuki he says he was asking her for advice. A story which can only evolve to have Anna be the object of his affections. Which has its own set of complicating factors, though those are on the back burner for now.

Eventually a group date is hatched by Mitsuki, as a means to help Nuk-kun get with Anna. Anna and he are the only two who know the full extent of the fiction at work here. The group go to the Underground Museum, giving Anna (who functions well as the comic relief valve when the pressure is on others) a chance to rant about the locale. Things are going okay until the planetarium looms. Mitsuki tries to get Remon to sit with them so Anna and Kazuhiko can be alone. Remon tries to get the two of them to sit alone. Mitsuki pushes, not realizing he’s sticking a knife in Remon’s heart. What a mess.

Eventually Remon unthinkingly blurts out the truth and flees. Mitsuki wants to follow, but Chihaya (though I can’t blame her) guilt trips him into staying. Nuk-kun rushes after her because- well, you know why. Nuk-kun is such a kind fool, truly. He has no clue what to say or how to help but he doesn’t want to leave Remon to suffer alone. She tells him a sad story with a happy ending, boards the bus for home, and winds up fleeing to her boho grandma’s house in the mountains. Everyone starts to worry when they don’t know where she is, but Koto eventually finds out from Remon’s mother and organizes a Lit Club rescue mission (neglecting to tell Nuk-kun to bring a change of clothes).

It’s remarkable the way Makeine balances the Debbie Downer of all this hormonal heartbreak with very effective comedy. Stuff like the sugar theorem and the”right-left” BL debate (OK, I admit I never heard that right-left thing – it really is code) and the river crab bit is really funny. And it keeps the tone of the show from getting too heavy. It just works, all of it. Even if Makeine weren’t far more gorgeous than it has any right to be, it would still work. This is a pretty special piece of work so far, and that’s coming from one of the most skeptical members of its potential audience.

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7 comments

  1. N

    Last week I commented on the writing quality of this show; now I want to emphasize how great the pacing is. So much has happened (your coverage didn’t go into the road trip at all, and that was like 1/3 of the episode) and yet it didn’t feel rushed in the least.

    Nukumizu (is he a writer? so far I’d say he’s an avid reader) isn’t the only good boy here, either. All the unrequited crushes have proved themselves to be good guys – deserving to be liked by the losing heroines – whose only fault is being dense and inexperienced.

  2. Well I mean, the last two paragraphs are mostly the road trip.

    Nuk-kun is writing a LN for the same site the Prez and Komari are.

  3. N

    Can someone writing a LN really be called a writer, though?

    Just kidding. I thought he only wrote one piece that was mandatory and now he’s going to revise it because, again, it’s mandatory. I don’t really see that as a writer, still

  4. A

    I actually was also reminded of another show this week – Ano Natsu de Matteru. Not plot wise but the vibe it gives off.
    Something about the summer feel of it and the balance between drama and comedy.

  5. I can totes see that. That was also an incredibly beautiful series visually.

  6. R

    *Lemon. I think there’s something about translating Japanese into English that makes the L and Rs weird. It’s the same thing that happened with Lachesis in Fire Emblem Genealogy of the Holy War where her name was originally thought to be Rachesis. But Lachesis is actually a name where as Remon and Rachesis aren’t.

    Anyway I think an interesting thing about this episode was how Mitsuki is so unbelievably dense about Lemon and her feelings, but managed to make a reasonable conclusion of Nuk-kun’s fake girl story. If Nuk-kun (and it might not be an if for all we know) actually did like Anna, it actually would be harder to talk with a girl in the lit club than a person outside of it. That being said, Mitsuki is an idiot for not asking why they need to be in a changing room to talk about that.

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